Jimmy
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Post by Jimmy on Nov 10, 2003 14:40:23 GMT -5
I am a penciller who has recentlly tried my hand in inking. Well enough talk here's my inks  Joe mad's Pencils |
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Post by Mad311 on Nov 22, 2003 18:01:01 GMT -5
WOW!! Jimmy...fantastic job! I know you are looking for a critique but as one inker to another let me just say I can tell you spent some time on this and just want to offer my props before I start pointing out any minor flaws.
The first thing I noticed is the difficulty the eye has distinguishing between cabilletro's body and the peices of splintered wood. Perhaps a little bit bolder line use on the splinters to seperate them...and then there is no action line behind him to convey his rising up..might also fill in some empty space in the background.
The only other thing really bad is possibly to many or to closely spaced action lines in the bottom left corner box.
Of course if these were totally finished ink peices you shouldn't have those pencil remarks in frame but I'm sure you know that...
Again, very impressive work and I really want to commemt on the first box's attention to detail with such a close shot of the body and the incredible job you have done with the wood grain throughout the whole peice.
I really look forward to anything you do in the future.
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Post by Mad311 on Nov 22, 2003 18:04:01 GMT -5
WOW!! Jimmy...fantastic job! I know you are looking for a critique but as one inker to another let me just say I can tell you spent some time on this and just want to offer my props before I start pointing out any minor flaws.
The first thing I noticed is the difficulty the eye has distinguishing between cabilletro's body and the peices of splintered wood. Perhaps a little bit bolder line use on the splinters to seperate them...and then there is no action line behind him to convey his rising up..might also fill in some empty space in the background.
The only other thing really bad is possibly to many or to closely spaced action lines in the bottom left corner box.
Of course if these were totally finished ink peices you shouldn't have those pencil remarks in frame but I'm sure you know that...
Again, very impressive work and I really want to commemt on the first box's attention to detail with such a close shot of the body and the incredible job you have done with the wood grain throughout the whole peice.
I really look forward to anything you do in the future.
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Post by AioRiA on Dec 2, 2003 12:47:46 GMT -5
:oSWEET LORD!!!!  I'm a drawer myself, and I'm inking some friends work... but GOD ... YOUR Work IS great!!! Man It'd be cool to get in touch for some tips.. about inking.. ( if you don't have any problems.) Sorry about the english, but I'm From Argentina.. |
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Post by Madman! on Dec 3, 2003 22:02:44 GMT -5
no crits here this looks amazing professional work. I agree with grail maybe some tips on inking or how you did this maybe with a brush? digital? pen?
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Post by keitaro urashima on Feb 18, 2004 5:26:00 GMT -5
i think he used mixed medium of tech pens, brushes and caligraphy pens... ;D nice  |
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I'm a drawer myself, and I'm inking some friends work... but GOD ... YOUR Work IS great!!!
