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This is my latest drawing.

Love to hear comments.

Anyone want to colour it? Sean perhaps?

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Come on guys. Login and reply.

I need comments. I'm not full of myself like that guy who thinks he can rival MAD himself. Just want a few comments.

[Madman!]

Hey that's a really nice piece and it's just in your sketchbook?!

If you want a crit I would say something needs to happen with his arms, right now they kinda look short. I know they're suppose to be bent holding her but they still kinda look to short. That's really kinda nitpicking but just that I'd say something..it's a sweet pic though!

I might give a shot at coloring it but I probably won't be able to start until like sunday night, I'm busy all weekend. You got a larger scan? so if I do decide to color it.

[noel]

This is cool, dude!

[CyRuS]

Very nice.
My only crit is that the biceps and triceps are at the wrong angle to the forearm. They're facing inwards too much, they need to be facing outwards.

[Grey]

Sorry I don't come to these forums that often.

You want comments? Well, I'd be proud of this if I did it myself. It looks very heavily influenced by Mad. Not that that's a bad thing. I like the strokes that seem to hint at shadows.

Crits? You could make her fingers nicer, more slender. Check the perspective of the sword handles. I'm not sure where the perspective of the pic is.

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Thanks all for the crit.
Very appreciated and noted! - Arms do look a bit short now that you focus on it and the muscle structure in relation to the forearms is a bit out.

Anyone wanting to colour it should click below to download the hi-res pic.


www.sight.co.za/drawings/samcluer/damsel%20in%20distress%20%A92005%20sam%20cluer.jpg


Thanks dudes!

Later.

[olisipo]

man i like the way you draw but if u want my opinion u'de better take a look at an anatomic book!

[drazen]

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow this chick has the biggest boobs I have ever seen-the one is way too big than the other but the drawin' is good

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Hey guys. Thanks for all the crits and comments. I really take them all to heart as I want to improve my drawing.

Olisiopo: "man i like the way you draw but if u want my opinion u'de better take a look at an anatomic book!"- please elaborate. I will take advice, but I need to know specific areas. To me, my anatomy is fine. If you're refering to his arms - the size is deliberately made extra big. Please enlarge on your comment. Appreciate it.

;DDrazen: "wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow this chick has the biggest boobs I have ever seen-the one is way too big than the other but the drawin' is good" Thanks for the comment. Appreciate your appreciation. The chicks boobs are correct size if you look carefully. The front one looks bigger only because of the cloth draping over it. If you look closely just above the guy's fore and middle fingers, you'll see a shadow that separates the outline of her boobs from the cloth folds draping over them.
Perhaps next time I'll make those things more obvious.

This is what I like about this forum. When you draw something that you think is good and post it here, you get a perspective on things you never saw before. It helps you learn and grow.
This is where Mad! is such an expert. Getting everything anatomically correct as well as doing it in his own awesome style.

Keep the comments coming.

I'll keep posting.

[ck]

Wicked i like it most awesome.

[eworks]

The drawing looks really good. I like your style.

[Sean]

its nice..

send me a high res scan and I'll see what I can do one day. I'm not saying anytime soon just at this stage but maybe one day...

cheers
Sean

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[design]

Very nice work.Her boobs are bigger then her face.Boobs always same size as her face and don't draw a lot of lines in her hair.Beside that you got it............Are you planning to ink it?I want to see it inks.

[nefar007]

i think you oversized the guys biceps... which is not good...