memo
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Post by memo on May 17, 2006 21:52:08 GMT -5
I finally got around to finish this piece. This should have been ready last saturday but work got infront of me. I'm trying to experiment with different angles with my pics now, I feel they are my greatest weakness. I hope you like this. ------------ Hey it's me again. Some guys at the Keron Grant forum pointed some stuff to me. Specially about the jungle being too simple. Here's the updated version of the pic. I hope you like it. www.deviantart.com/view/33450085/All critiques are welcomed. |
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Post by Madman! on May 26, 2006 17:29:45 GMT -5
Hey Memo I see you're on the boards right now. I was gonna comment on this drawing the other day but I've been busy with doing job interviews, that's why I haven't been around here much lately.
This is a great piece I really like how you got the pencils to look really dark, what shade of pencil you using to get it so dark..2b, 4b, etc? Well you did a very professional job on this in my opinion.
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Post by memo on May 29, 2006 19:05:50 GMT -5
Wow, that really means a lot to me. Thanks for the kind words. I use mechanical pencils, 2h for the sketching and hb for the hard lines. Since I like when the work is totally clear, black and white, I dont use many kinds of leads. Maybe I should give t a try. Anyway, thanks again!
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Post by kpopnonstop on Jun 7, 2006 19:50:54 GMT -5
Hey, how come your not getting more replies? I think this is really good. Better than a lot of the comic artists out there. Keep up the good work!
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Post by memo on Jun 8, 2006 16:03:38 GMT -5
Wow, thanks for the positive comments. I really appreciate it.
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Post by kaos on Jun 9, 2006 1:59:39 GMT -5
I think its pretty cool. im not too keen on his claws though they look too manicured. but it still kicks ass
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Post by memo on Jun 10, 2006 14:12:04 GMT -5
Thanks, kaos. I´ll be sure to work a different style on the claws next time.
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Post by theultimatartist on Jun 15, 2006 4:50:57 GMT -5
well... it's more like he is hovering in the air that sittint in a tree, also the poeple on the ground look off... great work though... keep it up ur elivating
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Post by pencilmaster on Jun 15, 2006 8:46:06 GMT -5
Yeah indeed, sitting in a tree like that? He'd surely fall  |
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Post by Byrne on Jun 15, 2006 12:30:52 GMT -5
I could be wrong about this but I think it looks like wolverine is leaning forward to drop down on the two people below. Just a thought.
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Post by nefar007 on Jul 25, 2006 21:45:31 GMT -5
yeah, i agree to byrne. the wolverine might fall. maybe your angle isnt well proportion thats what i see also.
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Post by Byrne on Jul 25, 2006 21:58:45 GMT -5
Perhaps Nafar007, Memo intended wolverine to appear as though he was about to fall down on the unsuspecting militants? I don’t know. Memo you want to clear this one up for us?
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memo
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Post by memo on Jul 26, 2006 9:55:51 GMT -5
He is just about to drop, this is actually a panel of full sequential, when I get the time to work on it I'll upload it, mayde that could help. This should be clear, though, muy try harder for the next one.
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Post by Byrne on Jul 26, 2006 11:13:34 GMT -5
That’s what I thought. The longer I looked at it the more I could tell that he was in the process of shifting his weight forward so that he could fall on the people below.
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