my first post

[drkfire2340]

hey wasup you guys like the title says this is my first post. i didnt draw alot of marvel or monsters until i saw some of Mad!'s work. now im like completely into it like i went to the andrew loomis website and printed everything. so far all i have of my drawings is a goblin and i used one of joes goblins as reference . well its not my best work because its actually my first beast. so here you go tell me what you think and the flaws in it. i46.photobucket.com/albums/f138/drkfire2340/1123844992_l.jpg

[Byrne]

Drkfire,
Nice to have you aboard. I had a look at your work and you did a fine job. If you want to know what I think I had the feeling that you need to get yourself a nice, sharp art pencil to draw with. The one you have seems to live you with oversized lines in your work. That is to say, some lines are much thicker then others when they should not be. This could be fixed with a finer tipped pencil. This would also benefit your detail work. All in all the work is very nice.

[drkfire2340]

heres another one i used my cuzens scanner

[drkfire2340]

srry just forgot this one i was really bored so i drew my shoe

[Byrne]

Now that is funny. I remember drawing my shoe out of boredom once. But that was a very long time ago. I noticed something in your work that I would like to bring up. When I was looking at your shoe work I noticed that you tend to brush your lines in instead of making just one nice clean line. For example, looking at the bottom of the shoe you see that you used 9 or 10 short lines instead of one long continues line. You might try working on that. It helps make the work more detailed and clean. Great work by the way! Learning to draw clothes can be difficult so starting now is a good idea.