kaos
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Post by kaos on Sept 13, 2006 0:58:01 GMT -5
This is the same guy. Good vampire in future, human in past.
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Post by Byrne on Sept 13, 2006 10:05:02 GMT -5
I like the image. Its very clean and there is a far amount of detail to look at. The only thing that I can see is that it looks like his torso should be a bit longer and his arms and head could be a little bigger. As always this is only a suggestion. Your work with clothes is good. You are very talented my friend.
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kaos
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Post by kaos on Sept 15, 2006 0:57:18 GMT -5
The head definately coul be abit bigger. But thanks. Crits are welcomed anytime.
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Post by Byrne on Sept 15, 2006 8:44:40 GMT -5
Very good. I like the proportions better on this one. You have done well my friend. I have a Question for you though. What is the difference between a good vampire and a bad one? Don’t then both kill for blood?
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kaos
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Post by kaos on Sept 18, 2006 1:01:16 GMT -5
Alex has a conscience. He Drinks animal blood supplied to him by a boy who works in a butchery. He saved the boys life so this is his repayment.
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Post by Byrne on Sept 18, 2006 9:14:01 GMT -5
Nice, so you have a full story going with the characters here then? Have you anything that you could share for the rest of use to read? I would like that.
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kaos
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Post by kaos on Sept 18, 2006 9:24:41 GMT -5
I have a prologue. Thats about it for now. Still trying to get the rest on paper. It's in my head. from start to finish. The prologue for the movie is slightly different to that of the graphic novel i'm trying to write.
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Post by Byrne on Sept 18, 2006 10:42:55 GMT -5
Man you have thought this out entirely then. Do you think you could post some of it?
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kaos
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Post by kaos on Sept 19, 2006 1:24:47 GMT -5
This is a story that was born in my head 6 years ago when i was in grade 12. I'll post the prologue soon, tomorrow maybe.
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Post by Byrne on Sept 19, 2006 7:40:16 GMT -5
I'll be here looking for it.
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